Also, typos in the second part of that sentence. Correct to "...it was only when the game..." and "...cheesy mechanics that I gave it a pass."

May want to edit your note for clarity in the last sentence. Try putting a semicolon after the word "Magic".

This is correct. Seeing this and thinking it was in the game actually made me want to buy it more.

What happened to the comments section? It'd way too quiet.

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